Giovan Alonzi: California Poets Part 9, Four Poems
- David Garyan
- Oct 17, 2023
- 4 min read
Updated: Nov 26

Giovan Alonzi
December 22nd, 2025
California Poets: Part IX
Giovan Alonzi
Four Poems
the mookse & the γrites
Eins within a space and a wearywide space it wast ere wohned a Mookse.
—James Joyce, Finnegan’s Wake
how many bad turns turn a bowl into a jug with a long narrow neck full of minced meat?
mookse whimpers whines
sniffs
& licks but licking’s not
a trick
harpoon-like & long the grites
gorges smug in the jug eyes glazed beak lodged
legs long
furry mookse flat flummoxed
pure fury
testing mooksey’s moxie
beak full of meat
gritesy gurgles, flatter me moo, & i’ll see if i can plate some meat
moox dog-smiles, says, pretty gritties
sing me a little song
the grites wet speck-for-speck tugs
its beak from the jug & squawks
dirty trillings right before it pokes the mookse bloody-blind
the mookse cries
why my eyes you’d won already nasty grites what cruel rule is this?
but no response is cautious
to the mookse before the sound of flight & smell of shit
fills the mooxies sense of swamp
then a scurry to its under earthed nook
bumping into trees lost at sea without a star
dawn to dusk everything erased
a long droll caw portends the jot, is that you? i am blind
will you help me?
give me my cheese, says the ever-night
& i may lend my eyes
o mookse amewl rolls
& cries & bares its teeth
revived by irritation & pain
the jot caws above
whetted trickster’s pride swelling bloody in the face
the mookse licks the half-light catching lastly low breezes of a settling darkness
mookse often eager for the dark only wishes absent light
didn’t demand to be the revelation
aching in its essence
something big something nothing
floats above the moö
scrambles further using scents sounds of bugs to flee a looming
phantom drawing mucksies awkward tenor
does it grab the canid by its feet?
writhing in the air the mookse’s sense of the swampy edge proceeds to
melt away the smell of muck the smell of shit & wetland bloods
as something hollow as a needle & much deeper than the deep
penetrates the pelt wherefore the tiny dog before a bliss
begins a-soothing whilst a-hanging
smelling not a thing not a body but a thought against its nose
becoming dry its twitch of life a tired guide only wanting rest before
its resting means that it will die
black oils on black velvet holding mookse
like the womb that carried it in its skulk of kits
if you want you can bite me now while
you still have the strength, says the thought
but i am afraid
says the mookse
though i feel, coos the mookse, very nice
sometimes, says the thought, everything is exactly what it isn’t
tongue of mookse tries to lick
the offering it thinks a wing what very well
should reek of lake & shit
but now is fresh as death smooth & whiskerless
a bell compared to the vile
grites & the game of wits it isn’t in
if i am the meat you mean to mince
then why my eyes why the darkness why the stalking why the bliss
& with a shudder &
a shake its little
fangs
sink
into
the light
surfαce tension
los que nunca sabe nadie de dónde son
los mejores artesanos del mundo
los que fueron cosidos a balazos al cruzar la frontera
—Roque Dalton, “Poema de Amor”
endless shipwreck
a beached what does the sun want from me?
smack of translucent peactime tentacles
precious inflammation various millenial metals
geiger count the faces of our fluids
like feedbackwater doesn’t titter tattar
jacob’s light ladder cracking down on the turtle crust
boiling earth water air & fire
down to los gritos & sand paper sanity
mooking frowns raw private body shape
of court public parts up for childish persecution
civilians so coefficient
alien nomination the bookish odd’s bodkins
constant border line personality
incredible fear work & extreme bloodletting amid america’s
theory of a cure for a germ called distance
urge
for the closeness
secular cranberry bog para-flood all out of blood
cannibalists outlawing cannabalism teeny-weeny
guillotines’ uncondition ugly christian space values
honeymoon to waterlemon
neo-fresco losing pigment
is the message is the medium is the nation of innards
& orphans joining the call to measure
emptiness
α fαce unto the crowd
io numb nile-side to see the loose truth
in the juice - spherical holstein’s black & white
cosmology - serious mookuments
ropes floating limp hands above a papal white
robe hiding midnight tome-like - face gray
long dead deep folds
super duped cottonwood’s bomb of gilead
gushing - luring the mookstock to
the muscles of the mountainside
martyr sauce at the crusade parade
words floating fried - dead air activities
reactionary thermodynamics
sexual creditors putting stock in panic’s
alpha malediction - syntactical assault gear
an earthy word births a bird
of mouth - rotoscoped & rodeo clowned
in the night’s quietude - a miranda writ birdcall
sweet n lo, slowly reduced blood
sugar - sunflower swallowing sunslaughter
half-fie’s darkling dayfly - judgmentaly ill wide
peephole & the old morse
of the woodpecker - a friable destruction
of wild life-habits where light’s allowed
to speckle sense - wavering
in the weight of where a tabernacle stood
woodstock isn’t woodstock til it becomes
the official name for rome
half a calf ’s sound for stargazing between trips
to the trough - notebook returns me to my san
fernando scrawl - short
message service - technical realization’s
radiation of knowledge meant for the mobile
originated & the mobile terminated
baby tlic squirming in the beast we need sated
butterfatty colloidal suspension of plymouth
rap rock - terran fear
of blood children - what a great depression
variety stow-away - radio knows
a wailing siren as well
as its air raids - a movie of background whining
body of a child - hood grey in a bush-citadel
doom’s mook! when wood
looked for turns to roots - nincompoops
& bootleggers on lonesome roads’
automatic reaction to big city
pickle hearts & the red eyes of empathy
vitality’s dissected ecstasy - breath half alive
severed center’s so shy
A FACE (wrapped in a shroud - his sentimental barbarity
& adamantine anti-intimacy - has no fears to share for their burden,
no fears to spread like butter,
no fears to flatten & smother, no fears of the inability
to fear the light’s identical other, needing no need to mention
it isn’t mentioned):
lovehisvoicelovehisguitarlovehisideas
hot body of honey-woke ham radio
brand spankin’ nu deal saved
some beauty unrest - echo-dislocated limbs
curling & cramping into ghosts
the sworn & the fettered
swaddling a little rock - mighty morphin’ baby
in the manger - large economy sized - hurdy gurdy
middle earth aged & out of kilter
a state of the art psalm shelter - bone white
boy dreams drip castling - spreading
spectrum to shuck
melt & bend artificial intelligence failures
retro’s active as a rusty chain of neighborly
reactions - gross bodily forces
not soaked & missing man of ruinous
mutinous hands womanning humanness
the mud man’s
unmasked amanuensis chugging whole
mook & gritting his teeth - broad &
bemooked expression
on this side of our sidereal half-tides
questioning peacemanship: what is it to look
without the thundersoft decay of a love?
skull
Where
the eye
was
was
a bellow
pinched—
trunk
d
i
s
i
n
t
e
g
r
a
t
e
d
;
sun
stripping
the jungled
attar
of memory
endlessly
memory
endlessly
memory
endlessly
memory
endlessly
in
the centuries
is of ivory
not
memory
melody?
memory
elegy?
memory
penalty?
memory
weaponry?
− − − • •
Knockings
I never
dig out—
& my mouth
pours out light
in lieu of concrete.
Invisible trees
grow here
& shadows
splinter
into personage:
V's
edges
sharp enough
to cut
open
unforeseen
joy—the only joy
there ever was.
Her speckled hand
fluttering
against her neck,
searching
for survivors.
Anything left
of deep music;
any air left
she & I
might remember
how to breathe.
Author Bio:
Giovan Alonzi holds an MFA in Creative Writing from CalArts, where his thesis was awarded the Emi Kuriyama Memorial Thesis Award. His writing has appeared in Fence, Los Angeles Review of Books, rivulet, Full Stop, & elsewhere. He teaches writing composition at California State University, Northridge in both the English Department & the Department of Central American & Transborder Studies. He, his wife & their daughter live in Los Angeles on Tongva land.







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