Kurt Lipschutz: California Poets Part 9, Four Poems
- David Garyan
- Jul 29, 2024
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Kurt Lipschutz
December 22nd, 2025
California Poets: Part IX
Kurt Lipschutz
Four Poems
WINDY NIGHT IN EDEN
It was a windy night in Eden
And the rain came pouring down
Eve was packing up for Sweden
Adam lay there on the ground
The storm tore loose his fig leaf
The wine flowed through his veins
For a man just been evicted
He wasn’t feeling too much pain
Crazed buzzards made their patterns
Around the inside of his head
The very birds of prey he’d taught to fly
Demanding to be fed
The woman’s skin was golden
The tears rolled down her cheeks
She’d had enough of knowing
And feeling like a freak
The voice inside the burning bush
Had shut the gate for good
Now all blue eyes and blonde hair
All day she dreamed of Hollywood
It was a windy night in Eden
As they went their separate ways
He to live the life of conquest
She to cry and count the days
The bush was cold wet ashes
The Tree of Knowledge swayed
A flaming sword lit up the sky
Three figures turned away
It was a windy night in Eden
The snake drank his hard cider
And asked a trucker who’d just stopped to piss
Going east? Can you take a rider?
TIPPI HEDREN SITS AND SMOKES A CIGARETTE
cross-leggèd and cool
in the still afternoon
behind her, the jungle gym
growing black with bird
one dark shape at a time
COMMON GROUND
Has he ever listened to
Lily, Rosemary & the Jack of Hearts,
all nine minutes of it, and absorbed
the coherent if circuitous tale it has to tell?
Doubtful, though odds are
he hasn’t been able to avoid it piecemeal
in a boardroom or a sky box or a penthouse,
in a jet limo town car on the links.
Has he ever said Dylan’s name out loud?
Granted, I’ve seen too much Law & Order—
all those episodes multiple times half asleep,
and leaving aside that on tv cops
are brave and photogenic and painstaking,
and follow up on leads and (mostly) follow the law,
as opposed to street cops, many of whom
call to mind high school bullies handed badges
(and often drawn, disturbingly, to him)—
but, then again, the desire to see perps collared,
crimes punished, justice done, is reliably satisfied
in Dick Wolf’s goldmine of a fiefdom.
Lily, Rosemary & the Jack of Hearts
similarly unspools a narrative
of plunder, deceit and murder, with
Big Jim’s “body guards and silver cane”
ultimately useless against the outlaw antihero
in the Decisive Moment, Bresson stepping
from the shadows with his trusty Leica rangefinder
with all but silent shutter at the ready.
Were he to actually listen to the song
and slowly grasp the story line,
would he recognize himself as Big Jim
rather than the Jack of Hearts?
Could he imagine a scenario
where Melania literally knifes him in the back?
Wouldn’t it be nice, The Beach Boys sang.
It would be pretty to think so, Hemingway replied.
Or is a song, even that song, just a song,
like Law & Order is a show,
and there is no Superman or Batman or Lone Ranger,
only comic books and tv series and blockbuster franchises.
Had he written it, the defendant would pronounce
this a perfect poem, But he didn’t and it’s not,
and today he squatted in a courtroom
posing with that jaw about to crack determination,
probably releasing copious effluvia
for his ringside handlers to breathe deep of
cartoon steam coming out of his ears
visions of revenge doing eye-level kicks in his head.
And I suppose there’s little chance
he too is rereading The Dream Songs
after so many years and with great pleasure.
Common ground can be hard to find.
MOTION PICTURE
Nighthawks at the lounge car
(the diner’s closed)
roll west through Arizona, darkety darkety dark,
the second feature blaring, Mel Gibson
on one screen, Mel Gibson on the other.
9:00 p.m., Union Station or bust.
Downstairs, the smokers, sequestered,
share third- and fourth-hand toxins
freely in the aging democratic air,
with their own hazy screenful of Mel.
Come Chatterbox, Budsucker, Goldenyears, Navywife,
Lonely for, Lucky in, Runaway Heart,
gather round for some government-subsidized fun,
as scatters of loud white and butterscotch light
tag along then fall back and are gone.
“We used to play out by the old lighthouse
when we were kids,” emotes Mel.
Plot travels, train rocks, night fears subside. . .
There is one of us from Anywhere and God Knows Where
and East Nowhere,
with a few fastfood-orange seats left
in this overlit rolling stock Bijou,
the only theater in town.
GOLDEN STATE MEDITATION
In the crisp fluorescent dusk
the bus pulls out of Bakersfield,
leaving the yellow seashell,
the inevitable arches,
a turquoise flickering arrow
and so much more behind.
A Nissan sign beams down
upon its shining charges,
greenblack hedges line the murk,
traffic lights play referee
to the rising tide of reflux
gassed up to the rim
and good to go.
The wheels on the bus go round and round
Fields of whatnot. Bursts of nothing.
Four- and 18-wheelers eat our dust.
Night falls in a fingersnap,
painting all the windows black.
The kid with wheat-blond hair
who just signed up
says they asked if he could kill.
The wheels on the bus. . .
I close my eyes to look inside.
Kill who? By Riverside,
his head was nowhere to be seen.
I’d never been so happy
to see a Coke machine.
The wheels. . .
Author Bio:
K.Lipschutz (formerly klipschutz) is the pen name of Kurt Lipschutz. First fruits: The Erection of Scaffolding for the Re-Painting of Heaven by the Lowest Bidder (o.p.). Upon publication of Premeditations, he was shocked to discover that he has seven collections. He has co-written approximately 100 songs released by Chuck Prophet, including eight tunes on Wake the Dead (2024). Between 2014 and 2017, along with Jeremy Gaulke, he edited the collectible minimag Four by Two. (A complete set of twelve issues resides in the Special Collections Library at U.C. Berkeley.) K.Lipschutz lives in downtown S.F. with Colette Jappy, two cats, and the new kid in town, Dante the Inferno.







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